Thank you for all the work you have been doing on these pages. I hope you don't take my edits wrong. Mostly I am just trying to tighten up some phrasing. Another thing to remember is to avoid speculation as much as possible. Like with the note about Copperhead. If there's a "hole" in the narrative it is not our place to fill it, merely point it out. For a final suggestion, don't make TV Tropes style "response notes". The page should not be seen as arguing with itself.